Author: Shirtaloon
Rating:4/5
Comments:
This was originally written as a serial on some web platform, and I hear it's still there. That introduces a few oddities, where you get information repeated. Overall it's not a problem.
All in all, it's entertaining. The protagonist has a very definite way of looking at the world, but he's not one to "do as I say, not as I do" so he shows a level of integrity about his beliefs that you can respect, even if you don't agree.
Detracting from the story is the length, and the number of POV shifts. Fortunately the shifts are short, and eventually tie together.
I am interested enough in where it's going to read the next volume when it releases this month, but I'm not waiting with bated breath.
Bedroom Activities: FTB
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FTB/Explicit/None – Fade to black bedroom activities vs “Onscreen” vs No activities
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